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Sadistic Assassin
I hate to say this but this story i think should be under the erotic horror section, because `this woman is won the road of being a sadistic assassin of her husband. She just got through having unprotected sex with an untold number of men and is going out again to do the same. she has not picked up one condom. I can see her giving her husband Syphils, strain resistent gonorrhea, hepatitis C and positive strains of HIV/AIDS. He is going along because he either fear or love her. She is taking vicious vengeance against that borders of a sadistic nature to where she could kill him if he has sex with her.
Nah!
Too silly to be believable.
Love your story
You write the best stories on this site. Loved it. Keep up the great work.
Andy
For the others that hate it. It is like tv change the channel. idiots. Takes lot of work and hours to write these give Linda a break. And a special Thanks for taking time to do them.
And then
And then Dan grew a set and hung the silly fucking whore up in a tree and cut her ears off, and cut her eyes out and slit her face and cut her nipples off and then cut her guts out and fed her to some coyotes.
Excellent
Linda, just love your stories I reread them every other month or so while jacking off. Wonderful.
Totally disgusting
In your closing statement you said " no one can dish out a payback better than a woman" You have no right to call yourself a woman, You're nothing but a moron, an idiot and a slut with no moral values what-so-ever. Why don't you do the right thing by walking out and devorce him if you hate him that much. What a useless slut you are. Cheers.
Hmpf
Two things...if anyone could explain where the "loving wife" was in this story I'd appreciate, I've read it and can only find a cheating whore and wimp dumb assed husband. Second, a commenter wrote "Takes lot of work and hours to write these give Linda a break." Hmm..it might take a mass murderer a lot of work and hours to wipe out a family of six but I don't respect his "work," don't intend to give him a break, and sure as hell wouldn't emulate his "work." I've never found control freaks and cheaters to be erotic and am amazed that anyone else would.
I AM SORRY.
This was crap!!!!!
Just a wishfull fantasy--
By an ultra feminist. Mindless and perverted.
your stories are really terribly disappointing
You write ok, but really, you suck at titling your chapters! You say Danny's wife takes total control of her husband here, but really she is just beginning to exert her authority over him when the story concludes. She will not have total control over Danny until he spends the evening in the bar watching his wife get taken by all the men he watched her with on the video, and then gets forced to clean her out, and afterwards is made to polish their shafts as well. And the story would be that much better with the bar scene included. Afterwards, you could probably have gotten the two to have forgiven each other once Danny's wife got her fling out of her system, even though her need for control in their relationship would still remain, and what she chose to do with that, well...
You did the same in ch. 9 of "I Got a Job", where you said the husband was going to learn to eat cream pies when you simply ended the chapter by having the wife wondering how she could go about getting her husband to eat a cream pie from between her legs. WTF? I skipped the rest of the story just to read that particular chapter! Boy, what a let down!
Anyway, as I said, you write ok, you just have to be a bit more accurate with your story descriptions.
I would not have come home.
I would not have come home. I would have followed your every movement until I knew where you were. Then I would do my thing one man at a time. Yep, I would take a taser and then beat the shit out of every one of the men with a baseball bat. Yep, they would be made mush. Probably dead. Then when all of them are done, I would go after the wife, giving her video to her work, where they would fire her, but she would be an internet porn star. I would then divorce her, after I showed her video to her church, family and friends. Revenge, huh, Take it from a man, you have no idea.
Quite a Leap of Faith(less) Here!
Sorry,but a guy who's running around getting it on the side isn't going to just cave to a wife who's gonna shove her revenging gangbang twat as a treat to divorce.
AND,say it with me now,"STDs! STDs! STDs!" ~ Yeah right,the motley crew sticking Linda are devoted practitioners of safe sex. ~
Instead of wearing a sweatsuit to watch her get gangfucked,Linda should have advised Wimpy to wear a long raincoat since heavy downpours of sperm are predicted!
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