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Unfaithful Minds

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by Anonymous06/20/15

An Original Concept

But not fully developed enough for maximum effect. Some more background on the couple telling us how they came to their relationship would add depth and interest to the characters. Also some more lead in on how their daily lives brought them to this point of mental infidelity.

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