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LOVED IT !!!
Looking forward to more of this story .
Just one question
And in all that time Lindy never inquired about your wife? You mentioned earlier you'd kept the "situation" hidden.
I think we all have cousins we'd love to fuck, some of us just never got the chance/right setting.
Three stars.
MB
Lovely
A heart warming tale full of love
The "Welcome Home" says it all.
It would be obvious to a woman that there is no woman's touch in the house, also other relatives would have talked.
Needs more.
A great story that calls for more, more. Thanks
also more
could be developed into so much more. Its like an outline that needs blooming. The feel is there but what a beautiful bloom it could be. GP
Rebel Yell
I don't know if she, along with Billy Idol, gave a "Rebel Yell", but I'm certainly shouting "More, more more".
Huh? That's all there is?
This is the second story of yours that I've read so far, the other being "Cousin, Sister, Who Cares?". I'm noticing a pattern to your writing, a not so great pattern.
Literotica stories are all about the sex. You write a beautiful build up, then blow right past the sex scenes, giving them short shrift. All tease, and no please.
As they used to say in the Wendy's commercials, "Where's the beef?"
So far, I have yet to see a fully developed story by you, FLrider. There's not enough substance here to rate higher than 2-stars.
I feel the same as the others who have commented.
Nice story, but far too short.
Just as it gets interesting, it finishes.
Not a good way for an author to treat their readers.
Please continue with this !
I can identify!
A very good story. Personally, I would have liked to see more development of the characters. The comments about lack of detail in the sex? Eh, I think that's your decision. (Believe it or not, there's a difference between erotic literature and pornography, although that escapes a lot of people who comment on these stories!) So: make it as graphic or as generalized as you want it to be, and let the turds fall where they may!
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