Gilgamesh

The language is great

The story is short, and, although it does give us some insight into the characters' personality, the plot is not fleshed out at all. But the one thing I loved through the story was the way you use words. The beginning with its tong-in-cheek formality; the giant's thoughts expressed with simplicity... It all made the reading experience really great. So, I just hope there is a continuation to this one, and that it will be longer, with some plot into it, and all the other developments one may reasonably expect from a story.

Congratulations!