Bus Ride with Sister

I liked it

I hope you continue. 5 stars

Loved it. Will it continue?

Definitely hoping for a part 2, and more.

Awesome

Great story of sister and brother having fun.....

Hot hot hot

Hope for part 2

More please !

Very hot...got me hard and got me off!

Great start.

Hope you don't plan to leave us hanging with this ending .I would love to read more of this story .Soon ! Maybe you could describe what they look like a little .Hope to see part two soon ..

she's got a ticket to ride!

Nice story. I really enjoyed it. and the texting with mom while sucking off brother was a nice twisted touch!

Definitely continue this one.

5*s

5 star

great story line very arousing ur mind can visualize everything u describe keep it up does sister hint to mother of what is happening

Keep the bus humming !!!

5 stars very good pace and writing. Loved the scene in the locker room where they got undressed. Please give us MORE !!!!!!

tour bus.

5 stars, keep it going please.

Awesome keep it going

wow

Please continue this awesome story!

ride with sister

great story love to hear more

More More

Great story, keep it going. Thanks

Great fun

Great holiday.

Keep Going

Highly improbable, but such a wonderful idea, and highly arousing. More about this sexy trip, please. Maybe they'll find they aren't the only siblings - dad&daughter - mom&son, etc. on that bus.

More please!

C'mon HeyAll, there has to be more, right? What happens after this? Do they continue their activities throughout the trip?

Fun Story, Good Sibling Relationship

These two were a lot of fun, thanks to your dialogue and the situation that kept pushing them closer and closer together - literally. A very interesting take on a brother and sister hooking up because they're naked in the same place at the same time. I think the opening would have been stronger if it had started with them being told it was a nudist trip and filled in the background of how they ended up posing as a couple on the trip with their dialogue as they debated staying on the trip or leaving and texting with Mom would have had more impact if he didn't realize who it was until she told him. All-in-all a fun romp and good use of the Nude Day theme.

yes more please

It's to good to leave us hanging

So fucking hot

That turned me on so much. I'm dripping wet and in need of a huge cock. Please continue this story

Hope part two comes quick so we can find out how the rest of the trip went. He he. Doug

Great story. Can't wait for part 2. Hopefully there is a part 2. Theres so much more they can do on this trip.

Wonderful!!

Excellent story with great promise for future episodes! Keep up the good work for all sister lovers!

WOW!

Amazing!

Amazing!!!

Great

Loved it one of the best I have read here please complete more about the ride!

So . . .What Happens Next?

What happens when they get to the first stop on the bus tour? Ummm. . . .They find their room has only one bed? They go snorkeling in the nude, but not in the water? They have dinner in the nude, with dessert in their room? They discover that they love each other more than brother and sister? The possibilities here are endless. Keep going , hint, hint, hint.

Keep going.

This was a great story. Would've loved to see it be longer and go much further.

Bravo!

Very nice build up with this original erotic tale. Very engaging characters that came to life with all the proper detail and emotions laced throughout. The only issue with this brilliant Storyline is that it's so not finished... as the others mentioned. This is too good to leave it in such a unfinished state. It's a moral imperative to see what other mischief these sexy siblings end up getting into. The possibilities really are endless!

Very erotic and so HOT ...... yeah they both need to go further and get each other offer as much as they can while on the road trip. They can really have a great relationship after they get home. A hot n' hard one....... Thanks !!

nice, easy going story

Lot's of fun, and went with the theme

Loved her multi-tasking on the phone back to mom, cute touch ( the little bit of veracity that always engages)

Nice work

HOT!

This could easily be a series of nudist adventures for them...hope to see more!

Great story line

Well written and creative. I'd like to see another chapter!

Very hot.

My kind of story. I was completely turned on. There is a lot to work with here. Please take us further on this bus ride.

Very Nice!

I am imagining what "activities" they will enjoy. Well done!

Don't stop now!

You have a great writing style, how about continuing with the events of the next few days.
Well done!

Awesome

You should write some more about the rest of the trip

More, more!

This is a perfect setup for more action with sis and then with mom. Don't let it die out.

Great story! Hope you continue their trip for us :)

great story. You should write some more about the rest of the trip

More please

if you only write one more thing for the rest of your life, please let it be a continuation of this story, I love your writing style and this is one of the best stories I've ever read on Literotica.

Great!

He did well to not have an erection until she sat on his lap. I'd have got hard the moment she started undressing! Love it!!

*****

Great read.
Awaiting part 2.

Magical

That was fabulous and so arousing. Please continue with the outdoor holiday - Ita ready made for part two

Amazing

I had brother and sister neighbors in my teen years. They were similar to the siblings
in the story. They weren't bashful around me and played with one another openly.
I never got to touch the sister, but I still have those memories. It was in the 70's
when women were women, without shaving or heavy trimming.

Eagerly awaiting part II.

Very titillating story. Please continue with their vacation trip.

Great

More please

Mmmm

Definitely need to know more. What happened next? Please please please tell us more.

Vakay

great story can't wait to read more!!