All Comments on 'A Working Compromise'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Kind of nasty. Period gook? Gross. And females do not have Adam's apple. Only men. It's what makes men's voices deeper.

Less_IsbetterLess_Isbetteralmost 9 years ago

Nice. It reminded me of an ex GF by the same name. She just spelled it different, but acted the same.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Piss does not come from a girls vagina

They have a seperate opening for piss. That part really kicked me out of the story as her piss would come out in an arc and trickle into her panties not flow through it but it's still an okay story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
hates women

no fun there for either character. Justs an ugly abusive encounter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Nothing sexy about this

I am a Dom in real life, and enjoy water sports. This had no appeal or basis in reality. It was just an inaccurate, poorly written, gross, show of abuse. I hope you do better next time.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Well Dom GO FUCK YOURSELF! I gave ths a 5

for effort and content.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
That not a girl you have directly or

if you are with a partner that has a Adams apple you are not with a girl but a guy that has had his dick cut off because girls don't have Adam apples.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Giving the keys to the castle

So the main character knows the ex wants him back and just thinks the sub won't tell the new GF so he gets dumped? Stupid.

Timtom

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Tfs

Totally fucking stupid. When you learn how to write, try again.

Anonymous
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