All Comments on 'Naked For Freedom - Book 01 Ch. 09'

Are you doing more stories??

What happens Next??

Is there a Chapter 10?

Obviously another abandoned story, like so many on this site. Oh, well...

Is there going to be anymore of this series? Is the book still going to be a thing?

This was good and becoming great!

The idea of the story is okay. I would love to work naked. Two problems: one, the chapters are too short. There is no character development. No development or the world in which this story takes place. Two, the grammar is all wrong. Amy is a college professor. She needs to talk like it. Her dialog is akin to a dropout living in a ghetto neighborhood.

Okay, so it's not really that atrocious, but it is not up to an appropriate level for her education. This story needs to be rewritten and expanded. I would still like to read of Amy and Kim's adventures.