Exposure Compensation Factor Ch. 02

I liked it. Very much

...and hope to hear more. Very likeable characters. Horny, likeable characters.

Well ...,

Well ... Very well, and done up right !!! And, balanced, too! Your descriptions of the 'model', as seen by the photographer, were a definite bonus. TY

like it

And I won't complain at all if you write more about these two.

Great premise which deserves more chapters!

Loved it

I really hope you write more about these characters. I'd love to see how things progress for them

Up till now !!!

Great story. Up till now the best put down was "no thanks I already have one asshole in my pants" but your " "how about class, charm, money, talent...and me!" trumps it.
Thanks for a very good read. !!!

Fantastic

I love this tale

love this story!

please keep it going.

Definitely Enjoyed It

A great follow up to the first chapter. Not in regards to the sex, the first chapter has this one beat all to hell on the sex. But, the burgeoning relationship is very nice. Thank you

Enjoyable

I like the characters you write.
Many time it's seems like this character is a guy or gal because the writer says so.
The characters feel more real.
They feel feminine or masculine as Im reading.
A not too common thing.

Keep up the good work.

I rate 6 Stars ...

I Can rate my choices higher because I rate You as the first Star, a shining star among authors. Your characters have feelings and integrity. Even the barroom bully who knew when to back down. Definitely will entertain for years to come. OK ... Decades and eons.

SUPERB Chapter 2!!

Really like these characters, and actually characters in all your stories I've read so far!
AND there's even a 3rd chapter for these 2...!

You seem to have an intimate knowledge of this biz....

PS

I believe Cindy just hit 60, and she has got amazing genes..!

Over the top!

This one was the best yet!

I think I've made my opinion of the stories of yours that I've read as clear as I possibly can with the comments I've left, but "... best yet" is all I can think of for this story.
I'm just tongue tied!

And as has already been said, her reply to the "ring leader" was absolutely out-fucking-standing!


Brought back a memory of a young lady I was leaving an establishment with, replying to a similar question with, "He's a Sweetheart. He's not just trying to get into my pants. But that doesn't mean he's not going to."


Keep up the great work!