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by Anonymous

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by MaresEatOats01/11/16

So good to see you back

And more of your offerings are desperately needed here. Please?

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by burninglove02/13/16

Thanks for another Great Story!

Glad you are back to writing! There's a handful of writers I enjoy reading - you being near the top!

I particularly enjoyed your story "An Unexpected Reaction" Rates at the top of my list of favorite stories.

Thanks for using your talent and entertaining us!

burninglove

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by magmaman02/13/16

Caught wife

cheating, fucked up, guy, got divorced. How wonderfully UNIQUE!..
Sorry, nothing here. Boring.

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by Anonymous03/03/16

Nice

So sweet.

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by Anonymous03/30/16

Good

flash tale, all said.

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by Anonymous04/08/16

Nice Quickie!

Well done and concise.

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by sinsational8304/19/16

NICE

For a shorty story this was really good.

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by laptopwriter04/19/16

:-)

So lean, so short, so fully packed. 5 stars

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by Anonymous04/29/16

Welcome back

I hope this story isn't autobiographical.
Very good.

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by SELSTIM05/11/16

Great... but

he should have brought the propane back, continued grilling and apologize to his hosts while flipping burgers and hotdogs like it was nothing because he just didn't give a damn anymore. I still liked it and I usually don't care for flash stories unless they are funny. Sorry, I didn't know you had left but I'm glad you're back. Where did you go?

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by 1wrngrght08/13/16

atypical

not your usual effort...not bad mind you...just more of a snack than the feast you often serve up

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by Oldfart7208/27/16

Really

I think it is too short. Needs more. Pretty shitty all in all.

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by Anonymous02/11/17

Don't listen to that old fart.

It is a good story. Just not long enough.

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