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Nice setup !, please keep em comming
I really dig the situation you have set you can go every witch way with this. i hope you will keep working on this story and i cant wait to find out what you come up with
Fun tale
This is a good begining to what I hope will be a long and enjoyable series. Keep writing Steve and I'll keep reading
Compltrely nuts...................
..............but I loved it!
More please.
Great Start!
This has all sorts of possibilities. A little unbelievable, but still a great idea. You can make this as detailed as you want and I'll be looking forward to each installment. More, please!
Two Words : MORE PLEASE!
I thought your previous stories were the best, but you keep topping them. You can really weave a tale. One request. Please write more. Write a book. ANYTHING! Thanks for giving us all great experiences, even if they are (mostly) fictional.
I am already a fan...and this is just better and better!!!!!
Great start to a HOT story...anxiously waiting for more!!!!!
A promising start.
So far, so good. Let's hope that the remainder of the story measures up to this chapter.
Very Roman Holiday, only with sex. Nice! I like the characters, even if our hero is kind of a pansy in the face of danger. Carrie is delightful. Keep it up, Steve.
Too wordy, we don't need to know that he crossed from the bar to the lobby elevators, and he turned here or there. I gave up before the end of the first page.
Chapter two
What happened to chapter 2, says five part story but jumps from chapter 01 to chapter 03, 04 and 05
I can't see chapter 2
Has it been deleted?
What is happening to the chapters
Chapter 2 has now disappeared and Chapter 7 (not linked to the other chapters) was visible yesterday and has disappeared today.
Fantastic
Loving it.
Chapter 2 is missing
Where is Chapter 2?
Chapter 2?
HEY!!! Where's Chapter 2 ?!?!?
Chapter 2 AWOL
hey, i love your stories and wanted to read this series but hate to skip a missing chapter. Any chance you could get it re-posted?
We really NEED chapter 2
Great start!
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