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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous06/24/15

2 main comments

1) "Naked backside and voluptuous rear end"? That's redundant. Surprising that you'd make that mistake. You're an excellent writer.

2) You always write " The End" at the end of your stories, but the way they are written, it seems like they can be continued. They never truly end. Maybe write multiple chapters. Your writing warrants it, and your readers demand it. :)

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by WindySwimming06/24/15

Beautiful

Enjoyed it immensely. Usually I'm not into humiliation, but when it happens with consent, respect & dignity I can handle it. Well written.

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by Many_Memories06/25/15

Really good --

Made me wish that I was there to join in and to observe the festivities!

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Fantastic

This was wonderfully written. Right from the time of the interview to the description of Anne's orgasm brought on by Linda the details are great. I don't agree with one comment that says you write the end and this could go on. I believe it has a perfect ending.

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by Anonymous06/25/15

But don't let it be over!

Glorious story! I'd love to read another adventure about Anne and Linda

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by Bob_Aganoush06/27/15

I agree with others - I'd like to see more in this story

It's very well written and very erotic, I'd love to see you write more to extend the story.

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by Anonymous06/29/15

How Do I Rate This?

There are only five stars available!
Fantastic! Don't stop now! What happens next?

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by csosh07/01/15

I agree with the other comments that another chapter is needed.

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by Anonymous07/18/15

WOW

Congratulations. You have done it again. THANK YOU VERY MUCH!!!

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by maddict07/27/15

Indeed.

We should cum more often. Your story reminds me of "Eyes wide shut". A powerful orgy in a very exclusive mansion, with many wealthy people. I'm glad you didn't exclude the help.

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by Anonymous08/11/15

Very good

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by lowkeyone09/14/15

WOW

Congratulations. You have done it again. Fantastic.

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