All Comments on 'Trespassers Will Be Shot On Site'

by theravenfox

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RobDollarRobDollaralmost 9 years ago
Yes ma'am!

Make love to the camera? I can do that for you! lol

Another triumph, Raven. :) Come on, everyone, let's make this one WIN!

Strife01104Strife01104almost 9 years ago
If that is improv.....

....i want MORE!!!!!

steves_momsteves_momalmost 9 years ago
Very sexy.

I loved it, and I'm not even a guy! You have a very sexy voice. Good luck in the contest.

dusty1928dusty1928almost 9 years ago
A contest winner!!!

Seals & Croft was a nice audio touch, great adlib Raven, it was everything I've come to expect from your stories. It was hot, sexy and very erotic...thanks for the mind fuck babe

dylan_tdylan_talmost 9 years ago
So Hot!

As always, another amazing audio Raven! Imagine my groans and growls after listening to this one rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr.

Scotsman69Scotsman69almost 9 years ago
SITE?

or perhaps SIGHT?

I do wish Americans would learn to spell...

Blacksun1992Blacksun1992almost 9 years ago
Throughly impressed and incredibly turned on

Amazing adlib, I'm a recent fan of your work and I say you give my previous audio passion a run for her money, great sound effects as well though the shutter was a bit annoying a couple of times it added realism to the fantasy, your dominant voice and play left me with a very noticeable bulge(hard to cover that up at work lol) would love more dominant recordings, maybe even you pegging or doing a fiutanari scenario (sorry anise nerd :#)), if not oh well but I'm really looking forward to your next piece

theravenfoxtheravenfoxalmost 9 years agoAuthor
@Scotsman69

"Site," as in "location." It was a play on words/spelling. My goodness, do you normally prowl Literotica looking for typos and then fail to understand the puns?? Perhaps no one has explained to you, but LitEROTICA is intended for purposes other than PROOFREADING!

theravenfoxtheravenfoxalmost 9 years agoAuthor
Thank-You Replies To Commentors

dylan_t: It's only a small payback for all the moans of pleasure you've given me. Can I be your wicked woman? ;)

dusty1928: "Mind fuck!" I LOVE that term for what I do. I'm so glad you enjoyed the story. :*

Blacksun1992: Sorry about going overboard with the shutter clicks, but I'm glad you enjoyed it regardless. I made you think naughty thoughts at work??? I love it. Don't imagine me under your desk or anything next time you're there. ;) And I LOVE LOVE LOVE futa!!! I'm a big fan of pegging too. We'll see what happens!

steves_mom: *BIG KISSES* I adore my female fans! I'm thrilled that you liked my audio and thank you for the well-wishes. :*

Strife01104: Anything for you! :*

RobDollar: You are an amazing audience and you help me create better and better audios by giving me the feedback and response I've craved for YEARS. Thank you, mi amante. :* x 8 (P.S. RobDollar is my boyfriend...lol)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Post more often!

I wish you submitted more audio stories on Literotica. Your lesbian ones are amazing. Not everyone can afford to pay for private audio commissions. :(

Keep up the great work regardless!

bibookwormbibookwormalmost 9 years ago
Awesome as always

Why have I never heard you do femdom before? There's just something hot about a chick who decides to pursue me instead of the other way around; it takes the pressure off. Loved how everything starts out artistic and gradually turns sexual. Nice improv, too.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Sexy voice

You have a excellent voice, would you like to record audio stories for <a href=http://www.boltikahani.com>boltikahani</a> and make some money?

NaughtyboyKevin83NaughtyboyKevin83over 8 years ago
Oh my..

Hot, steamy oh so arousing, had me begging to cum. Orgasmic from beginning to the end... Can't get enough of that voice... <3 <3 <3

bawdi1bawdi1about 3 years ago

Superb story, I was that guy and lived every second as you spoke to me! Unlike a previous comment I actually found the camera shutter rather exciting in a strange way, it’s speed increasing with the eroticism. As you easily transported me to your beach I to became very horny with you and only just managed not to cum, as you demanded, but certainly enjoyed my release as you rode me and took your photos!!!! Thanks xxx

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