Unethical Doctor

How is this Incest/Taboo?

Maybe I'm reading it wrong but I don't understand how this story is in this category?
She goes to the doctors and that is it? Don't get me wrong it was a good story but maybe you should move it to another category?

Idiotic tense to write in

Writing in the first person present is about as non-immersive as it gets; instead of me being allowed to visualize the story as it unreels, you're telling me what I'm thinking at every instant, thereby removing me from any involvement. I found it boring and contrived for that very reason, that there was nothing for me the reader to take as my own from it. 1 star, and next time please write a story in a tense that works.
PS Check where you're posting next time, this belongs in Erotic Encounters or some such.

Quick and dirty

Don't let the naysayers discourage you, especially on POV. The story is quick and hot and I got exactly what I needed from it ;) It's also in the correct category. Keep writing!

I'll admit, I didn't read it. I read the first line and knew the story was going to suck. Good writers catch the readers attention and can write without telling. Might as well write by numbers.
1. I walk in
2. then this
3. I'm wearing
4. I turned off readers
5. most stopped reading
6. but some had nothing better to do
7. so they read

To all those saying or questioning why this story is in this category, it is because it is a taboo. It is not usually something people do at the doctor's office. Society doesn't regularly go to a doctor to get fucked or otherwise and that is why it is secretive, just like most incestuous relationships. I agree the writing tense threw me off, but it wasn't the worst writing ever.

whatever

Well, nobody was injured or abused. No one's parentage was questioned and the whole proceedure seemed to be conducted with pleasure in mind for the patient. But this whole narrative sucked. The story sucked. Though the patient seemed to be intent upon giving pleasure, there is nothing erotic about this story. No tenderness, no closeness, no joy. He did not request her permission, so he basically raped her. There is nothing here that fits the 'incest/taboo' category. Just,'come back next year and we'll fuck you again'. Are you in Jr.High that this seems titillating to you? It isn't particularly important that everyone that reads your work likes it, but active dislike is another thing entirely. And by the way, how do you describe this point of view? Also, she hears him open a drawer to get the Speculum and she describes it when it enters her as 'warm'? There is just so much here that doesn't fit.

Taboo

To all the critics saying this is in the wrong category, you're wrong. This is incest/TABOO. If the doctor & nurse had done this for real in the UK they would both have been struck off their respective professional registers without which they cannot practice (not to mention being imprisoned, it being ILLEGAL to have sexual relations with a patient).

Takeatumblewithme

How is having a 3some with you gyno and a hot nurse not taboo? Think before you speak!!

I agree with the comments about the taboo nature of the encounter

While the viewpoint is not my favourite narrative style, I disagree with those who say this is not 'taboo'; for those who say it doesn't belong in this category, I advise you to look at what 'taboo' means and implies. This category is not simply for incest stories, it also encompasses all those activities which go against societal norms, or are regarded as unthinkable or inviolate in the normal course of events. Having sex with your doctor definitely is a societal taboo; one thing that was drummed into us at medical school was 'make a patient of your mistress, never make a mistress of your patient'. I freely admit, I don't like the way this story is narrated, I couldn't get into it, but I'm not going to condemn it for being in the wrong category, because it's not. And that's my 2 cents worth...

Great

I am an OBGYN. I have dreamed of doing this since my first day of private practice. Of course, I never did. Nowadays I am a little stooped, balding a little, and have a little paunch. Too much time behind the desk and computer making patient notes and reading medical journals and I can afford to hire the yardwork or home repairs done, so I get little excersize. I've really enjoyed this, even though it is written from the patient POV rather than the Dr.'s. Maybe thats even better. This way I can fantasize that I did it and my patient (s) actually enjoyed it. Rather than calling the police on the fat, balding, perverted Doctor who raped them with his tiny pekker. Yes this has been a dream of mine, and probably many Doctors for many years. Good stuff here!