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Excellent
Your attention to detail is wonderful and you have started an ongoing story that I look forward to reading.
a great discoverycums in many forms
what a way to start --what a way to discover!
rebel sandwich
hmmmmm best way to get stories is makin your fantasies reallity ..... come get sum
this dose of erotism....
in the parking lot, certainly was a pleasant read. vintage vixxxen inks the spot!!
Impressive Start
An almost poetic description of two souls in the shape of bodies exploring and merging. Powerful by being understated; there are no superfluous words wasted to explicate their online chatter. You introduce us to the couple having already achieved trust; it is now a celebration of that trust, made more powerful as they exchange the D/s role.
This exchange is not always necessary, but here you show it serving to heighten and cement their trust. As an aside, I've seen it suggested in many different forums that sometimes, when the Domme lives the sub experience, she becomes a better Domme.
Even without the clue of the title (just WHERE have I seen this phrase before???), it's obvious at story end which path they'll take together.
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