All Comments on 'Fear'

Very strong message. Well done!

I can identify...well done!!! Beau

You express the fear all too well, Madam.

I always said you are a good writer.

There is no doubt in my mind that this poem was written strickly from the heart. I could honestly feel the words as I read them. Wonderful job and my prrayers are with you.

DG Hear

That was well-deserved. =)

The emotions bleed through your poem. Thank you for sharing, and hope you get well soon.

med humourous torts as a away of coping, TK U MLJ LV NV

...that there is no improvement

...that can be made to this poem, trust me, I' m a doctor.

Well done!

Beautiful fragment. I enjoyed this because of the line, "I don't want to stop breathing." Thank you for sharing, and congrats. :)

This poem is even more important in the age of COVID

How unfortunate that over 300,000 of our population have died in this pandemic when the numbers could have been greatly reduced by proper precautions.

Back to the poem, it's powerful from the aspect that we all know how fearful we are of not being able to breathe. Thanks for sharing.

interesting thought. or is it a need?