by HarryHill
...of words, emotions, concepts, imagery!
brim-full of sound play, it's not easy to write successfully about the act of writing - but you've brought your skills to bear here and have produced a piece worthy of attention.
what i love most in this piece is how you frame vignettes, like the thoughts that arise on the turning of each card. but they don't feel isolated: sound and the sense of watching a man scratch ink across a page work to make this piece as cohesive as it is comprehensive. hats off, Harry x
Promising to spend time on it to savour slowly all the nuances of a Writer's mind / experience you have skillfully highlighted but till date have not done justice to your Poem : will respectfully read it , appreciate it & then give a fitting comment commensurate with your effort --- your bro Ash
...like Ash, I could not comment on my first visit to this, I was just in awe of how wonderful this piece was. Your poem created such a visual in my head, I saw it on the big screen, I needed 3D glasses to watch it and the surround sound took the roof off.
Hearted <3 and high 5ed