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by ofloveandlust

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Get an editor!

This is full of errors

"but ass naked"

"He wore is straw cowboy hat and sunglasses and was swishing a bourbon and coke that was almost entirely coke as he entertained the ladies floating around him with s story about our snorkeling disaster."

"I kind of laugh when I think about all the ruled we had when we started.“

And many more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Did ...

... you go to school?

Did you actually attend any English lessons?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Yup, a few typos

Do a spelling and grammar check next time.

But the story was cute... A fun and sexy take on an overdone theme. I enjoyed it!

impo_61impo_61almost 9 years ago
At least...

At least that was the life they have chosen...And both were equal partners in "crime"...However I think this is "group sex"...3*

ofloveandlustofloveandlustalmost 9 years agoAuthor
i suck, i know

I hate proofreading, i admit it.

olblueyesolblueyesabout 6 years ago

excellent.. gracious hosts.

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