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Get an editor!
This is full of errors
"but ass naked"
"He wore is straw cowboy hat and sunglasses and was swishing a bourbon and coke that was almost entirely coke as he entertained the ladies floating around him with s story about our snorkeling disaster."
"I kind of laugh when I think about all the ruled we had when we started.“
And many more.
Did ...
... you go to school?
Did you actually attend any English lessons?
Yup, a few typos
Do a spelling and grammar check next time.
But the story was cute... A fun and sexy take on an overdone theme. I enjoyed it!
At least...
At least that was the life they have chosen...And both were equal partners in "crime"...However I think this is "group sex"...3*
i suck, i know
I hate proofreading, i admit it.
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