by hasnoalias
I have much less of a problem with your rewrite of doctor's Visit then these other guys.
You tried out ideas in one and went with what worked for you on the other.
I personally think that this is the better of the two but I'm bias
I like chicks with dicks
I don't have a problem with this being a rewrite of a story posted in another category, especially since I very rarely visit that category.
For a story of its particular theme, it was a fun read. I enjoyed it.
Rewrite or not, I am loving this story BIG TIME!!! Keep more chapters cumming!
all boys should have a mother with a cock who likes to fuck his young ass. then to discover his female doctor has a cock of her own. I kept waiting for his mother to show up for a threesome.