All Comments on 'The Tally Pt. 02'

Please continue

Please continue this story it is wonderful. I look forward to the next part.

Well written but too unrealistic.

The world we live in is brimming with a vast variety of people. Her behaviour is extreme but I think it’s plausible. I’m guessing that this is set in America, it’s hardly a stretch to imagine a young woman, an only child of conservative disciplinarian parents in the ‘Bible Belt’. She could easily be described as naive, sexually repressed and socially isolated.

I thought this chapter was absolutely perfect even if he was mean and kept her off balance by locking down the lifts, a calculated risk that light sexual humiliation would add to the arousal from the punishment. The whole thing was very cleverly done, good for them if they develop a personal relationship.

Tess (uk)