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Sexy success story!
At the risk of being repetitive, another winner!!! I know it is a fairytale, but it is entertaining and fun!!!!!!
going a bit far I think...
I think you are going a bit too far fetched bringing up the idea of gang bangs or swinging. I can see some serious problems in that regard on the horizon.
Still fine tale....
Riding the third rail.
This tale started with a familiar theme -- the unhappy "royal" who yearns to live like a "commoner" -- but with what promised to have an erotic twist. So far, interspersed with overly-detailed digressions about security, it has delivered on that promise -- perhaps too much so, even by this author's polyamorous literary standard. Granted, every character involved thus far appears to be in on the party, so to speak, and that is always a welcome development for erotica of this genre -- which much too often features a cuckolded husband as a mere humiliated bystander. So, kudos to this author for avoiding that cliché. Instead, though, he (if indeed he is a male) has developed throughout his Literotica œuvre a wild polyamorous cliché of his own that, judging by this still developing series, is getting even crazier than his stories that claim to detail his supposed real-life seminal escapades, including a creeping hierarchy in this story that has already marred his previous work on a relatively unconventional (if not entirely revolutionary) lifestyle. The creative reader could also suggest that these characters are also so one-dimensional. But then, this is Literotica, which doesn't promise anything more, so maybe I expect too much here.
Going Downhill Rapidly
This story series started off really well but has deteriorated strongly since the introduction of the MFF aspect and more recent stuff. Sorry to say Steve that the story is no longer interesting and I'll be bypassing any further chapters. Great at the beginning but no longer.
Started well........................
............but turned to shit when group sex started. Should have gone in to group sex to start with, NOT Romance, then my time would not have been wasted.
BTW Chapter 2 is missing!
Perhaps just as well.
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