All Comments on 'Troubled Transformation'

by oggbashan

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HuckPilgrimHuckPilgrimalmost 9 years ago

I don't think I've read anything quite like this before. Very imaginative -- I get the sense you write about magic a lot. It's interesting to see magic included in a present times story.

NaokoSmithNaokoSmithalmost 9 years ago
You cast a spell on me!

That was great! so inventive, and funny.

What I like is, how Rebecca and Malcolm are ordinary people with regular jobs who have to commute etc - like many actual witches. Also, I love stories about ordinary people having great sex rather than amazing people having no sex (as in Cinderella).

:rose:

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