by MatthewVett
Does Eric have body hair? Do Wendy's lips land in a lush pubic patch? When she traces her hand on his chest, is she combing through a dusting of good chest hair? Is there a treasure trail to lick down? Give Eric these details! Wendy seems an eager learner! Will she massage his shoulders/chest as he has done for her?
I disagree Eric I think it would ruin the story to busy it up with extra detail. Less is more sometimes even in literature.
Harder and harder to find a girl who has never seen/had/touched a penis before. Nicely told.
You are a great story writer. Liked this one a lot. I could see myself init and I like that.
I liked the idea of Wendy and Eric being 'penis pals,' sharing his penis' and even 'looking after it.' Would be fun to carry on the idea!
This is truly erotic and too much information is porn. I just freakin' love the mood. One of the truly best stories on Lit... that I've read, anyway.
I seriously hope that wasn't the end and I just haven't noticed part 2 yet. It's hot and needs to be longer
I seriously hope that wasn't the end and I just haven't noticed part 2 yet. It's hot and needs to be longer
"Short", well not short that way but storywise, and to the point. Well written, entirely believable. Liked it
Interesting and well written. It seemed much like an introduction to a series. Good tease. Thank you.
I found this such a believable erotic tale of two friends exploring their sexuality together. The story brings Seger’s Night Moves to mind. An exceptional snipet of life. Thank you for creating this and sharing your talent with us John
Great read! I've had so many fantasies like this from high school into college, and you captured the essence perfectly 🔥