My Pretty New Pet

Decent story but..

You used 'your' incorrectly.
'You're' my pet.
It's 'your' pet.
It pulled me away from the story.

Great story so far...

Really liked it...didn't get distracted by any typos either. Seriously, someone was "pulled away" by something so insignificant? (Since the author is writing this for you to read free of charge - and writing is a job on its own - maybe you should let it go, or go write your OWN TYPO FREE story. Just a thought.)

I like it

Yeah I wasn't really distracted by small grammatical errors either, I really really like how twisted and perverse our leading man is. Is this the first chapter in a series? I would definitely keep reading. Cheers and happy writing

Why

Why are people always bitching about grammar errors like news flash no one is perfect this is a site where anyone can post their work including AMATURES

Lol it's 'amateurs'.

Even the word 'naughty' is spelled wrong in your username, unless that was done on purpose.

If you're going to write a story for all to see, of course people are going to comment on the quality of the story. Grammar is fundamental to writing stories in the first place after all.

Still, the errors in this story were barely noticeable in a way that would distract the reader. The writer probably just didn't notice them at the time. It's pretty well-written actually and the content of the story definitely made up for it.

More!

Please! Need it, want it!

This is what I want done to me. Complete and total ownership.