All Comments on 'Sara's Car Trip Ch. 02'

If you have not 'caught on' to 'Youbadboy' yet, do yourself a favour and read anything he's written. You won't regret it. The guy's the best! Terrific stuff.

Great Story. Keep it going. Maybe get mom and dad in too.

what a great story...please continue the story or with another couple. Very hot story...thanks

Please continue the story but don't let the parents join in!

hehe People out there if you did not read anything by youbadboy then i think you are missing out what the terrific writer had written!

keep it up! hope to see Sara's Car Trip Ch. 03 soon!

great second part i cant wait till you write the third part if your going to add mom and dad then would you wait till part 4

Great story - keep going, and going, and ...

The brother and sister relationship is very real in how they playfully interact as brother and sister. Their slow exploration is born of many years of caring about each other and playing with each other. Their sharing their eroticism a natural outgrowth of their relationship and love for each other and their ability to play with each other.

I'm looking forward to Ch. 3 as Jason & Sara's relationship develops. Some people want the mother & father involved. I do not. I am with those who want it to be only Jason & Sara. This is a wonderful love story between two people, not just incest & sexual pleasure.

A excellent story. I think that this and Part 1 are some of the best pieces of erotica I have ever read. Add my vote to the "no parents" list

Please, more! :D

this is a great story i cant wait for part 3 but i will have to say i dont want to see the parents in it eather

Keep the parents out, it's just fine with them gone.

I love Brother/sister stories more than Daddy stories and this one is really well done.

Again, a terrific job! The story continues to build 'oh so slowly'. After many years of caring about each other it is inevitable that their sharing has become truly erotic. By all means, continue!

i must have jacked off 25 times to this storey

its a massive hit in my group of dudes

At this stage you have developed it nicely.It starts as pure sex initially but later on evolves into something more and the further sequels should have them continuing the affair even after they get married to different partners.

absolutly enjoy your writing........great story.....

This is awesome. Oh- and don't put the parents in. That would kind of ruin the great relationship we've got here

Playful, loving, sexy, sweet, erotic, and much more. Some of the best writing in the genre.

You bad boy. Mmmm. I just can't stop reading and cumming.

Awesome

i am so wet and horny and ican always get my cunt off with you. i need a brother like you. i would be wet and ready every time. thanks

Great story. I'm enjoying every paragraph.

GREAT story guy! ! LOVED it and beat off three times

reading it ! Damn, sure wish i had me a hot willing sister like sarah !! Keep writting and keep us cumming.

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Wasn't gna write anything but your stories get me there everytime you got a talent here thanks 4 sharing it.

I wasn't going to write anything either but you did ask. I love the way your write and what you write about. Sibling incest stories always get me wet and those with anal sex...well, I'm still panting! THANK YOU!

It was just completely erotic. You started realistically slow and built up slowly to what would happen. And the sex was just phenomenal. Loving and tender, but still dirty and rough. Incest might turn some off, but the detail and the great realism make up for it a dozen-fold. Worth reading at least a dozen times.

she should get pregnant.

Love the build-up... anxious for another chapter. My computer is smoking... sorry, it's me that is steaming, not the computer.

Hmm i think their parents should catch them.. haha. Well ive got to tell you, ive been reading your stories and i really like them. You've got some lovely stories eh.. :)

Your very beliveable Hot hot story is tantilizing.

How about an older women who observes their enteractions and befriends them with eyes on Sahara and works to that end. Their wouldn't be a dry chair pad or bed sheet after reading your rendition Bad Boy !!! Just a thought !

Bob E

Great story! Can't make it through a chapter with an orgasm!

I've really enjoyed the way you've slowly unfolded the story. It makes it lovely and sensual. Keep up the good work!

I love these chapters. They're filled with tender and sweet love making, which is so incrediably hot. I would like to see the parents go off somewhere. Maybe the parents could win a beach prize such as a three day/two night trip to one of the islands off Florida. So that the young lovers can have undisturbed time alone. Oh, don't forget to include a second couple for greater sexual fun (giggle).

Beautifully written, soft, romantic, sexy, erotic, natural, realistic. Nice writing style with great, very natural, language. Nothing harsh and crude. Look forward to each chapter.

very good-love where they're going with each other-great sex scenes-thanks

This Chapter 02 continues in much the same vein as the very imposing and awesome Chapter 01. The exception, being the overdone concentration of the potential shit-fucking by the introduction of shit-stopping plugs, overdone being the key word!

My fervent hope and continung wish is Jason and Sara continue their relationship in the same vein as the first chapter, which at this point seems to be taking a turn into the direction of unnecessary deviancy.

Your strength is in your descriptive writing which seems natural, not forced. This story seems real to me. I can actually feel like I'm there. Your challenge is to keep the plot going in a realistic manner. This is why I vote 'NO' on the parents. Realistically, one of your characters would meet a love interest that would test their relationship. Small criticism; use spell check.

I think this chapter is pretty good too. I like it.

an not wait to see where they go from here. Get caught by parents, (yes or no) get mom to join? how about dad? so many ways to go.

I like this story. Really good.

and learning about each other. then you decide to start going off into fetish and kinky. didn't need to do that.

Hey, fetish and kinky is learning about each other... And for some its not fetish and kinky, its just normal! Hell, my girl friend, fwb/fuck buddy, what ever the label, we had anal sex like our third time together. Just felt right for both of us and it was fun :)

This story keeps getting better - this second part get's five stars, the same as part one.

This is my favorite series because it shows the full development of the characters. Their love clearly is growing, but so is their adventurous sexual attitude. They know that they are the best thing for each other.

This is so damn great. Was disappointed at the end of the previous chapter b/c I didn't know it would have multiple chapters, but didn't want it to end.. So glad you continued it ! And now I see a part three to my right ! Here goes !!

Sara the little minx .

I think u should have mom get involved eather have her catch them or have the sister want 2 try pussy or maybe have dad get 2 fuck her

They have love each other and respect and trust each other.

Neither wants to hurt the other.

They can try new and fun sexual options

Just Wow

I really loved your story. Hot hot hot!!!

I have just found your stories. My only disappointment is that you don't seem to have written anything for some time.

However, I still have quite a few to enjoy.

5 Stars from me and I am sure an awful lot of readers would love to see yet more from you.

Micro-whine. "shew me away" on p.1 should be "shoo me away" ... "shew" is not a word I have ever seen spelled that way.

Wish she was my loving sister.

EXCELLENT series.

A wonderful story.

OMG, this series is soooo hot. I drip all day thinking about it.

"Sara's Car Trip Ch. 02:" Twenty Year Old College Student Sister, Sara and Twenty-one Year Old College Student Brother, Jason.

A great majority are very pleased with the story of this sibling couple continuing in the same vein, Brother Jason and Sister Sara, romantically in love with each other--not in love with their parents and not any other "moresomes!!" At this point in the love relationship my opinion is they should tell their parents about their love, their affair and their intentions to have a life-long "marriage," family style. Jason buys an engagement ring and proposes to Sara in front of their parents, vowing their life-long commitment to each other.

Of course they promise their parents they will finish college, and want to start a family with at least several children. The parents will eventually get over the shock--they don't want to lose both their children, and the prospects of grandchildren!

Writer 'youbadboy' keeps writing good stuff with emotion, that emanates from and between the fabulous characters The siblings know what to say and exactly when to say love and sweet-nothings to each other. They obviously are very much in love; their total commitment is eagerly awaiting to be unleashed! They must confess their respectful love to their parents!

I had an incestuous sexual relationship with my older brother when he was 19. We did a road trip together in his small camper for a family memorial event. During an overnight stay in a KOA campsite, we got very personal about our needs. Before long, I was in his sleeping bag in my underwear, playing with his huge thick cock and could feel precum leaking from his dick tip the more I squeezed and played with it. I'd never seen such a huge cock. I could also feel my pussy swell and throb as I pressed his mushroom head against my clit through my panty fabric. I wanted him to fuck me but knew it was wrong so I just kept rubbing his big warm penis head against my clit until I orgasmed hard. I knew he needed relief, so I asked him how I could help, and my instincts said to suck and jack him off. I'd never seen so much man cum after he got his nut! He spurted all over me, but I knew he couldn't help it.

It's pretty hot, not gonna lie. I wish you'd stop repeating yourself though. I mean we get it, he can smell the sex in the room. How many times you going to tell us he's smelling her and playing with her skin?

I don't usually read incest stories but this series has me hard as a rock through every page. Love it.

Great premise.

Nice step-by-step progression.

Not a better story/series on Literotica.

Five Stars.

To be continued, Jason and Sara should live together

As a secret couple.

Yes, you continue with the 'love story' between sister and brother...going just that bit more, pushing into new territory...

Sara is expressing her feelings for Jason, he is getting there...time to ramp up to full-blown open relationship in front of Mom & Dad...let chips fall where they may...this is TOO GOOD to keep a secret much longer!

(Maybe...Mom catches them, wants in too...??)

Could do with another proofread, but I liked it better than the first one.

I'd forgotten how much I loved this series! It's beyond five! Sure there were a few mistakes but overall so good!

Loved the story and how they get into liking different activities and wanting more. Please continue the saga so they both explode in sexual bliss

Great, except for the untagged anal :(

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