Thanks for sharing another great story with well developed characters. Not sure how you keep all the story lines and back stories straight. Keep it up. I will be re-reading this for sure!
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Anonymous07/03/15
Lovely
I really like all of your stories. They are always nicely written, to the point and interesting. Keep it up
Although a lot of it IS "Wham, bam, thank you, ma'am," you make it entertaining while you bring the characters to life. I am curious, though, and I thought you might have mentioned it in the story - how did they both end up in the same place, so far from home?
English
Fun
Not a lot to it, but a fun read anyway. 5 stars.
Good read
A nice well written story.
A part two might be created if it is as good as this piece.
5 stars
Lovely
Please continue!
Another great read!
Thanks for sharing another great story with well developed characters. Not sure how you keep all the story lines and back stories straight. Keep it up. I will be re-reading this for sure!
Lovely
I really like all of your stories. They are always nicely written, to the point and interesting. Keep it up
Love the humour that's in so much of your writing
Although a lot of it IS "Wham, bam, thank you, ma'am," you make it entertaining while you bring the characters to life. I am curious, though, and I thought you might have mentioned it in the story - how did they both end up in the same place, so far from home?
GREAT ONE
KEEP IT UP.
PLEASE!
Please turn it into a series! Seeing GOOD stuff here!
More please!
another great and sexy story. Lots more story potential here
ooohh good
Happy to hear there's more to come! Another great start for a another promising series.
Good writing.
Fantastic!
So glad to here there is more to come :-)
More.
You've done another great story, hope to see another chapter.
More please
this such a hot tale we surely have to explore the relationship further.
Thanks for writing this one too
Great!!
More on this pair please.
More
5* This was a funny and highly erotic story. Please finish it.
Don't stop now
You've developed the characters. Got a working plot line. Now for the next installment. Please.
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