All Comments on 'Rain Falls Ch. 07'

by Trahi

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great

Great story cum a few times very much enjoying reading it.

please sir, can we have more of those 2 yummy lovers..

cheers !

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
I Loved all Seven Chapters!

Well done - beautiful characters, wonderful twists and turns. Dylan, Sheldon then Jessica it was almost excruciating waiting for the next chapter to see where Eric and Rain would land. Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

This story was perfection!

willieonewillieoneover 8 years ago

Superb ending thank you for posting this amazing story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Loved it!

Every. Single. Chapter. This was very well done. Great writing, great sex, great characters. Keep up the good work. Can't wait to see what you come up with next.

canndcanndover 8 years ago

Glad Eric opened up and Irish loved him enough to go ater Rain. I hope we get to see Rain become independent and get a job that requires clothes to stay on. :) I hope we get to se what Eric is working on b/c his art is so tied into his emotions. Wil he finish that statue and why is it so interesting to Rain? Does he see himself as a baby?

I enjoyed this alot and hope Eric is able to heal to. I hope this isn't the end b/c I think we need to see these two move forward together with things out in the open.

judojonjudojonover 8 years ago
awesome

this story has so got me hooked great job keep it going

dez421dez421over 8 years ago
Perfection

I would love to read more of there developing love but you ended the story in the perfect place 😂

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

I hope thats not the end, I would like more. I've gotten into these characters and want to read more!

aclassyladyaclassyladyover 8 years ago
excellent

I must say I hope this isn't the end of this wonderful story. The story has been a good imagination for me and I feel like it could be real. Please keep writing about this story. I would like to see what Eric and Rain do now that they know they love each other. The reader needs to have a little more in this story.

ACLASSYLADY

AllAboutTheBassAllAboutTheBassover 8 years ago
More, please

Love it, the characters are so well developed, I could easily read another 2 chapters, or more?........ :)

AThousandWishes_PreciousLiesAThousandWishes_PreciousLiesover 8 years ago

Damn, I can't describe this feeling I'm getting. Man, I hate reading stories that make me feel emotional. DAMN AUTHORS!!(I mean that in the best way.)

nanobotnanobotover 8 years ago
a lump in the throat

This should be a movie. I'm crying even as I'm writing these words. How beautiful. You made sentiment without too much sugar. This touched my heart in every cavity.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Your Question

You asked for preferences over 3 chapters and or the 7+(i hope) chapters - my opinion, it makes no difference. If organizationally to your mind you like one over the other run with it, to me as the reader it didn't make a difference to the flow.

LOVED both stories. I hope you will continue to write here. You are very good! Love HEA's.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
GREAT ENDING

This is a great series and you ended it perfectly. I'm sure I'll read it again in the future.

wawferwawferover 8 years ago
Perfect

This is honestly the best ending to a story I have ever read. I don't feel like there should be more. I love how simple and literally perfect this ending feels. Lol most story's have me still wondering about the characters and drive me nuts till that author writes more, but your ending actually feels so right that it is refreshing and makes me want to read your story all over again. You are an amazing author. Please continue writing stories. And if you ever choose to publish please email me at Nynigo2@gmail.com I would definitely buy your books. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
I have never commented on a story before.

And I have been reading on Literotica for about 5 years now. This was truly beautiful and set apart from anything else I have read, on literotica as well as anything from the bookstore. Grammer was well done, and the story touched me. I could not get away. Totally neglected my hellish summer class deadline to read the entire series today. For the love of God keep writing. Get published! I have no doubt that you could, just please let us know on here when (not if) you do.

erotikpassionserotikpassionsover 8 years ago
Totally

In agreement with everyone, this is an exceptional story and you've ended it smoothly. I prefer the shorter chapters and frequent update though I have to admit I was late starting on the first chapter cos of the warning you gave but I should have known that the story itself would be as fantastic as ever.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

This really is a beautiful story! And Rain's character is really caring and attractive, no wonder Eric fell in love with him. The part when Eric said thank you to Jessica and acknowledges that helping him had cost her emotionally just goes to show how considerate he is. Love. And I must say that Jessica ranks high as friends go. But I'm hoping there's more to the story? Just because Rain and Eric's love is a story worth to read and imagine! Thank you for writing everything so far.

BastaBastaover 8 years ago
Giddy!

I was so giddy by the time I got to the end that I was clapping my hands! Well done, mate! Woohoo!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Excellent

Please never stop writing, and I hope you get published and become very successful. Just freaking BRAVO! Damn well done! I would have paid money for this story. Put on your bio where to buy your work. This is one of the best stories on literotica that I've ever read. Thank you so very much!

ladymaryladymaryover 8 years ago
This story is simply beautiful.

Somehow you managed to illustrate the subtle development of a very personal and delicate, yet intense love affair. It's not a story of two guys falling in love (as usually these kinds of stories are) it's distinctively the love story that belongs only to Rain and Eric. You proved that this narrative can belong only to these two. They are both complicated and weird but none of that matters when they are together because they just fit. Rain does not pick a fight every time Eric behaves selfishly or cruelly; not because he is a pushover but because it really does not bother him and he accepts Eric completely, thus he is his perfect other half. The way you portray Rain is just exquisite, he is an old soul. Although he had such a hard life, and he exists in a very tough environment, he has a true noble spirit and does not let anything or anyone corrupt that. I loved your other story but this is just a great accomplishment. thank you

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Fantastic story

Wonderful characters and excellent story! Hope that there'll be a sequel or a new story soon!

Clare6779Clare6779almost 7 years ago

Beautiful and real! They are the first 2 words that came to mind after I finished this story. Thank you for sharing it x

Clare6779Clare6779almost 7 years ago

Beautiful and real! They are the first 2 words that came to mind after I finished this series. Thank you for sharing it x

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Girl

Girl or Boy whichever gender you are YOU know you need to add more to this. This story is sooooo good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
My favorite...

Rain and Eric are my favorite fictional characters ever, I adore them both for completely different reasons . I have read all the Rain books multiple times and I always circle back to them about once a year... I wish there were new books about them but I know you did your due diligence in telling their story. I just love them they almost feel like real people to me. I love that they have ups and downs and love each other so fiercely but also want to knock each other out all the time. I just wanted to say thank you for bringing them to life, it makes me wonder if they are based at least in part on real people?

TrahiTrahiover 6 years agoAuthor
Author's Reply

@Anon,

Thank you. I am always thrilled to hear from readers, especially when it's complimentary. :-)

All of the people and places in this story are from my past. Some of the characters are amalgamations of two or three people. Some of them are straight out of real life. There are a few whose names I didn't even bother to change. So the answer is yes. They are definitely based on real people.

supervelvetsupervelvetover 6 years ago
Re: Both Falls and Storms series.

Whenever I read another series, I can't help but compare it to this one. I've found elements here that I'm hoping I would see in other stories. This is just solid for me. I want to elaborate and be more specific but no one would read this anyway... Lol

supervelvetsupervelvetover 6 years ago
The author is alive...

Thank God that you posted a recent reply. That gave me, as a recent fan, an assurance. Can we expect more works from you here? Do you have other works in other websites? Do you have Twitter or FB? Hope I'll see a response.

TrahiTrahiover 6 years agoAuthor
Author's Reply

@supervelvet

I LIVE! :-)

You are welcome to post your commentary. I will read it.

I don't currently post anywhere else. If you see my stories offered elsewhere, please let me know. I've had some issues with plagiarism lately.

Thank you for your support. I'm glad that you have enjoyed my stories.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

These last two chapters were beautiful. Bless.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Wow

This is such a realistic and very powerful story. I have enjoyed the roller coaster ride for the most part! I needed and wanted these two to figure it all out and find some sort of healthy happy relationship that worked.

Rain and Eric seemed to be broken in similar and very different ways. I was rooting for them all the way through the story! There is so much baggage between the two of them to sort out.

I loved the passion, the sex was sizzling hot, the jealousy and possessiveness both ways, it was very telling! I did not understand or care for the physical pain, the scratching, biting, taking Rain Dry and Hard are not my thing at all. I hated the Master, Slave scenes in the club, the Domination, ignoring Rain in front of Eric's so called friends bothered me a lot. I wanted Rain to end the disrespect, and being treated like he didn't really matter so badly. But I loved the tenderness, and Eric's openness to change as he was figuring it all out! I wanted more at the end, but all good stories have to have an ending. Beautiful work Trahi...... 5 stars

OpenthedooragainOpenthedooragainalmost 5 years ago

What a great story....Thought Eric was a dick at the beginning, but to love him, and so glad he, and Rain got together for ever....the best

curiousaudreycuriousaudreyalmost 3 years ago

Nooo I can't believe it's over!! But it's perfect... But nooo

dnsontndnsontnover 2 years ago

Masterful writing. Short stop ending left me wanting more. Bravo, Author!

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