Plenty of backstory: Brother steals sister's soiled panties to get off. Sister discovers brother is taking her soiled panties and is turned on by it. Sister confronts brother in bathroom by dropping trou and pulling his face into her crotch.
That's plenty of set-up for me. This is a stroke story. Straight into the action. This ain't a love story, it's all about lust. There's no need for a lingering build-up. If you're looking for that, there are plenty of other stories that do that on Lit.
This story is fine as is. Fast & furious. Wham-bam-thankyouSis. Short, sexy & horny as hell.
English
Good storyline. Would love to read part 2 soon.
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No background and they did it before doesn't work for me. How did they end up as lovers?**
Good story, just needs a little backstory, looking forward to reading what comes next
good
agree with lemonhead
OK as is
Plenty of backstory: Brother steals sister's soiled panties to get off. Sister discovers brother is taking her soiled panties and is turned on by it. Sister confronts brother in bathroom by dropping trou and pulling his face into her crotch.
That's plenty of set-up for me. This is a stroke story. Straight into the action. This ain't a love story, it's all about lust. There's no need for a lingering build-up. If you're looking for that, there are plenty of other stories that do that on Lit.
This story is fine as is. Fast & furious. Wham-bam-thankyouSis. Short, sexy & horny as hell.
Dark_storm is right. It had enough backstory for a quick lust/fuck. It wasn't romance or love.
Good story keep on writing.
Weak
Just weak, that's all.
2 thumbs down
Lame. Incredibly lame. Not one redeeming quality.
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