All Comments on 'The Stranger'

I could go for that. Anyone reading it can imagine anyone they like as the Stranger. I know I've got one in mind and that makes reading this quite hot.

"UUUNNNNGGGHHHH..." You need to remove all those. That doesn't translate into writing. And it's "pubic hair" not "public." Kind of an important difference!;)

This was a really good story. I could easily see it happening. I loved the part about her wondering if she was going to get pregnant.

Loved it so raw and passionate

That was incredible, a few minor errors here and there but nothing that detracts. Please keep writing.

so hot, so well written.

please write more!!

wish i was that stranger and the daddy to your baby

Incredibly written story, so hot. I certainly hope for an encore.

Best Story I have read on here, I loved it so much,I masturbated soon having an intense orgasm

Erotic and well written

Great story, loved it