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Well, if it had the makings of a story, rather than a single scene.....
....I might have felt better about it. As it is here, not enough material to call it a story.
We know almost nothing about any of the three characters and they come off one-dimensional, because you provided no real characterization.
It might become a good story, if you actually put that much time and effort into it.
My gut tells me this, while similar to a number of MC stories, had some unique and interesting elements and so, would likely be a 5* story.....if it was indeed a story.
good intro
I truly hope this is the first of several chapters, some with these two, some with more "customers," and some with the Market staff.
It is /definitely/ the start of a series.
Yup, they're pretty 1d so far. They'll get less so, although only to a certain extent due to the style I'm writing in.
Genre
This and its coming successors are my best attempt at a "consenting non-consent" story. It's kind of a niche genre I guess, but I get guilty even reading full-on non-consent or brainwashing stories.
Satisfaction!
So Far, Both Man and Woman are Satisfied! Until Many More Chapters?
Part 2!
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