All Comments on 'Cheryl... Meet the Author Ch. 02'

"She Tannisly sat down, ..." - what the heck is that supposed to mean??

Is this how much attention you paid to Proof Reading?

With such a glarinmg example I didn't bother reading any further!

Who knows, could have been a prizewinning story but because even you didn't pay much attention to it why should anyone else??

Personally I was generous - 2*

After the fact name change. Thanks.

The "k" scenes are so much fun. Written perfectly. So nice having her use the slut too. ;) I've cum to this a lot

Some of it may even be true

Thanks mr author man! ;)

"Cheryl"

Thanks

Can't even remember what's true and not anymore. ;-)