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by luedon07/04/15

Sweet story

And nicely written.
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by Anonymous07/05/15

Very interesting first story

I can honestly say that I thoroughly enjoyed this first story, however at some points the writing seemed a little rushed. I like the premise of the story, and hope to see a sequel soon!

Cheers, Dennis

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