I cried, boo hoo hoo! Pass the tissues, sweetie.
;)
(Could have a bit more descriptive writing - I'm not sure what any of the characters look like. Winner of a story arc though.)
Brad had it all backwards but then most violent people will tell you that they (the victims) were asking for it... Another case of ugly duckling growing up.
Solid story, I was expecting a child back home.
But, you were too wordy! ha ha, reminds me of the movie Amadeus where the king tells Mozart that his music has too many notes!
Thanks again!
ttom
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Anonymous07/31/15
I liked it: 5*****
Thanks for writing. tom anon
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Anonymous12/01/16
good tale
a lot of shit goes on in colleges and many times it comes back to bite you in the ass years later....Assholes like Brad should have been charged with rape after drugging her...personally he should have been beaten and castrated for what he did..I expect many men and women leave college having been total jocks and whores then settle down....but I wonder just how many continue the same life style....probably more than we will ever know....perhaps that is why there are over 1 million abortions every year.....
GOOSES AND GANDERS
cant always fly north or south to escape their environment. TK U MLJ LV NV
Too wordy.
What strange comments!
I cried, boo hoo hoo! Pass the tissues, sweetie.
;)
(Could have a bit more descriptive writing - I'm not sure what any of the characters look like. Winner of a story arc though.)
Interesting Resolution of a Complex Situation
Brad had it all backwards but then most violent people will tell you that they (the victims) were asking for it... Another case of ugly duckling growing up.
Thanks!
Solid story, I was expecting a child back home.
But, you were too wordy! ha ha, reminds me of the movie Amadeus where the king tells Mozart that his music has too many notes!
Thanks again!
ttom
I liked it: 5*****
Thanks for writing. tom anon
good tale
a lot of shit goes on in colleges and many times it comes back to bite you in the ass years later....Assholes like Brad should have been charged with rape after drugging her...personally he should have been beaten and castrated for what he did..I expect many men and women leave college having been total jocks and whores then settle down....but I wonder just how many continue the same life style....probably more than we will ever know....perhaps that is why there are over 1 million abortions every year.....
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