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Good start!
Hope you will follow up on this story line and keep developing characters and plot.
Good story. Keep it going.
Good story
I enjoyed this story as well as your other. Please write more.
Not to like?
Whats not to like about this story. Anxious to check out your others.
I'm left wanting more
i loved the subject matter. The plot was good, but I felt nothing when they got together. Not enough detail for a stoke story and too short on emotions for a romance. Also a bit unbelievable that the "ex" didn't know she was curvy if she has double Gs imo.
Having said that, I'd love to read more.
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