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Brown Bordellos

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by Anonymous

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by greenmountaineer07/08/15

This raw and well connected. The rage oozes out of so many words.

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by Anonymous07/08/15

So much dark magic...

By now I know that when you hit, you hit so hard. This one leaves me blinking back broken nosed tears and tasting blood, still on my feet for the slow clap standing ovation.

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by susansnow07/08/15

Anonymous

Do I know you? Your flow seems familiar. Reveal thyself! Hahaha! Thanks for the comments.

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by tazz31707/08/15

I CAN HONESTLY SAY

the boy is in need of therapy. TK U MLJ LV NV

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