That first paragraph was amazing. You have such a great sense of detail, and such a careful selection of words. I am not a huge horror or mystic fan, but the writing is so good I had to read on. And will read more chapters as well.
We live in worlds of our own design. Nothing is as it seems. Reality is a farce. People are not the innocent sheep keeping in line, As you're led to believe by their public masks. Truth is objective, our perception is not. Reality's subjective, so fill it with all the kin...