All Comments on 'Paging Leslie Thompson'

I enjoyed reading this story and I absolutely loved the humour and intellect behind it. The sex scenes were not prurient and contained a realistic amount of love and affection. The story being well written was the big plus for me. Hmmm .... I wish I could do as well, but I do have a tale in the pipeline. Well done!

or sabers would work as well. TK U MLJ LV NV

with good interaction between the two Leslies but went off the reservation somewhere around page 3 or 4 and completely jumped the track before page 6 when I hit the silks. Too bad, was enjoying it until then. Oh well. Thanks for your effort and for sharing it. My fault, not yours.

Too wordy and it's very dry!

Written in a way that is aggravating, takes work to understand what is being said. Some of it is clever and interesting, but the wordiness and attempts to be extra clever, to be recognized as a smart writer, overwhelm the story.