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Husband's Roommate

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by Anonymous01/17/05

Note from Mike

Great story! The slow build-up was excellent, and the fact that the progression moved to the inevitable end was very tittilating. Kathy was perfect--the slut that worked others to get her way. Keep writing!

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by PJ52604/27/08

Thank you

I was totally turned on by this story. I loved the description of John's cock. Thank you for sharing...

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by jackiedaniels01/17/09

a bad story

What a worthless pieace of crap story, with friends like that ass hole who would want him flying with you in wartime, and the slut bitch shes is trash a real slutworse than a whore at least a whore doesn,t pretend to be a wife,

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by TaintedHalo8405/23/09

Great Story

Got my juices flowing! Very nice, thank you!

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by Anonymous09/23/09

First time reading in "Loving Wives"

Well written I suppose, if you like adultery, cuckolds and such. I think I'll stick to reading romance or erotic couplings from now on.

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by Anonymous11/30/09

childish

all this story does is point out whiskybuffs lack of sex life.

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by Anonymous12/28/10

Hottttt dirty SEXXXX, I like the wife sharing but in reality I don't know if i'd really let something like this happen. That's why I fantasize only. hmmmmmm?

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by LVDesertGuy05/17/11

Descriptions are good.....

but you need an editor for the name switches and typos. Also, Troy is such a dumb fuck! He knows she is a slut-wife, wants her to be one and yet runs off and pouts like a fucking little kid. The dumb ass needs to walk in and fuck her ass when he catches her on some other guys cock, or bring them drinks and fuck her right after the other guy(s) do. lol But bravo on Troy's development if this is how you want him to be.

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by Anonymous12/10/11

NICE

CONTINUE

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by Booomer01/16/12

This was fantastic!

The wife's manipulating the husband into thinking it was his idea to initiate this (or be in control) by using "the rules" that Cathy just kept nudging out of the way to get to John's great big cock was a great plot device. I look forward to more of your stories. And to folks who read stroke stories and complain about fictional character's character flaws - go work on Senator Santorum's campaign and stop wasting time reading literotica!

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by Duna01/16/12

@ Dear Boomer I think for many readers this story would be erotic if the main character was affairs with many other women besides his wife. Lack of mutuality this story is not more as a simple wimp cuckold story among the more stories, only a benefit is in it that the main character has not sucked the loverboy's (Roommate) cock. Some cuckold stories instead of erotic generate FEAR, because the cock sucking cuckold husbands. There are not too many straight male readers who want to IMAGINE such a circumtances. When I was new on the net and started reading stories I read almost all types stories and this type willing cuckold stories were disgusting for me but this time I do not read them. I read this for your comment only and it is not too erotic a willing cuckold for me. If the author had written a starting true open marriage or other type starting mutual sexual connections (swapping, swinging), them do not matter. If the writer wants to write bastard stories with clueles dumb husbands also it does not matter because those stories help young male readers to think about the not DNA test proof children for their future, when the young readers become husbands/ young fathers

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by WarriorWoman08/28/12

Annoyed

I suppose this would be a good story for those individuals who enjoy manipulative and lying wives who cheat and walk all over their weak-willed husbands, and then their husbands allow that kind of behavior. I don't happen to be one of them. My advice is to change the description or tags, or add an Author's Note in the beginning so readers who do NOT like these types of stories won't waste their time and end up being pissed off. Your publishing this under the Loving Lives category is misleading, because she is not a loving wife -a loving wife would have been her seducing John because her husband wanted her to, because he enjoyed it. What she is is a dirty whore. ~.~

Your writing is average at best, but it's well-done, despite the typos.

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by semofuncpl310/02/12

Good

till last 2 paragraphs. He should have at least left the fucking whore. I would have killed them both in a fire in the apartment that would look like an accident. But I would have let them know I set it right before I locked them in.

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by Anonymous10/24/12

hot

I loved it. I don't want my wife going behind my back but iv told her lots of times I want to see her suck then fuck a big dick. She would love it he would love it and I would to plus it be hot as hell to watch. Just waiting for her to try it.

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by Anonymous12/08/12

luved it

Luved the story - My wife has a b/f and often when I am on night shift she will ring me so I can listen to them. they both talk to me as they fuck & he willl often still be in bed with her when I get home so I get to watch him fucking her too. she luvs me to clean her up after & then I fuck her too.

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by Anonymous01/06/13

To semofuncpl; you are a fucking moron.

Very hot - 5*

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by Anonymous01/06/13

Trash

This is what gets people killed, bellshit friends and stupid lying sluts. May this writer have both in his life.

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by jadecadence01/28/13

Thanks for the orgasm!

I would have preferred group sex, but mfm's aren't very popular. The description and length of the story is good enough! *kisses*

Keep up the good work! My fav. Author here is vetman!

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by OOAA04/22/13

Congratulations!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Congratulations for this excellent story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks!

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by Anonymous05/01/13

Pity

Pity you changed the name from John to Mark then back again during the story, but on the whole I loved it, will she continue her exploits with other guys in the hope that you will be watching?

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by Anonymous05/10/13

What he really wanted???

Where the hell did that come from? This story is so convoluted that the ending makes no sense at all.

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by ramonbrook05/31/13

While I enjoyed the story ....

I didn't care for the ending! He should have kicked his wife to the curb and kicked the shit out of his so called friend. Who not only cuckolded him, but put him but destroyed his wife's opinion of him. And she made her husband eat out her cream pie.

An F16 pilot who lets someone else fuck his wife, come on! At the very least he should have made his give up being a slut!

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by Anonymous08/12/13

So predictable

Before I started reading this story I wrote down how I predicted this story would go just for fun. I predicted that the roommate would not have a girlfriend, he would hear the other couple making out, she would feel sorry for him and end up giving him a pity fuck, he would have a big dick and she would end up fucking him often falling in love with his big dick. The husband finds out and throws her and the friend out and she moves in with the other guy.
I got the main parts right and I was not surprised that the ending was even weaker than mine. I think the husband could of used his cellphone to video tape the them fucking and then thrown them both out on their bare asses. The adulterers decide to move in together but he gets deployed to Iraq and she is left alone.
LoneWolf of the north.

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by chocolatesista11/03/13

wow

i would of fucked them both up, divorce the girl and sever ties with the friend

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by Anonymous11/26/13

Great ending

I loved the hot wife's final excuse: "I only did what you really wanted me to do." Ignore the losers who have to see a male protagonist winning in their fiction. This is great.

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by faulltw12/20/13

I agree...

with those who wouldnt like this to happen to them, but it isnt us in the story. I think the guy really does like seeing his wife do the those things. She knows this and is whay she doesnt hide what she is doing. Again, I wouldnt like my wife to do it, but I think this guy does.

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by Anonymous01/06/14

Disgusting

Jesus, I needed a shower after reading this cuck/wimp piece of shit. Glad to know they trust this fruitcake with a jet fighter...

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by Anonymous01/18/14

How about this shit?

"It's just a little blowjob Honey" Really? Well this is just a little baseball bat you two backstabbing motherfuckers.

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by dirtyoman02/01/14

More Needed.

Not sure why, but I really enjoyed this story.
I'm sure partly because for 3 years I was fucking my COs wife, & his German girl friend. Course that was 40 years ago.lol God the wife loved fucking on the floor with the curtains open. Their apt was on the first floor of a 4 story military housing in Hanau. I'm sure the folks in the two parallel buildings got some good looks.

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by Anonymous02/09/14

This is a little confused

The author is a little too excited by what he's writting. He keeps turning the story one way..that he Loves sluts and starts saying he had no trouble with marrying one. Then he tries to turn around and play the wounded husband who is been cheeted on. I wish authors like this would clarify what they are trying to say before writing something. IF this were a true story just being relayed then he is just a coward and his wife relizes this and is punishing him for being a coward. Either way it does not paint a picture of a couple that will grow old together thats for sure!

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by Anonymous02/20/14

Fuck my wife

Very hot!! A part of me (my penis) kind of likes the idea of moving a guy like this John into my house for awhile. The sexual tension between my wife and "john" will build.eventually he gets into her panties. He begins fucking my wife regularly in our bed.

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by Anonymous03/04/14

Dude the tags for this story are fucked up, how are we supposed to find this...

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by Anonymous03/27/14

The good thing about girlfriends?

The cheating sluts are cheap and easy to dump! I hope she bounced when he kicked her to the curb and moved on without her.

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by kantabcd05/18/14

Bad Story

Wife being fucked in front of husband and he is not telling anything, dumb story. Also he set a rule for this slut whore. What a bad idea!

I believe Troy is transexual, not a male.

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by Anonymous06/07/14

Yep

This is why two middle aged civilastions kicked our asses. The quality of our fighting forces sadly leaves a lot to be desired these days. They're all pussy cucks

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by Anonymous06/10/14

What the fuck?

I hated this story.
Be that as I truly feel: stupid assed Troy, set himself up to be cuckhold. As kinky and boneheaded, ignorant, STUPID as that mother fucker was, he deserved walking in on his wife fucking his roomie!
He heard from credible sources, well before he ever married this slut, that she was a fucking slut. Loved gang-bangs and group sex with men and women. So, he thinks all those credible sources he heard this from, about her, many his long term trusted friends, were all lying or jealous of this whoring slut? Particularly when some of them had been in the same college as wifey, at the same time she was, and knew from first hand experience watching her, she was a notorious slut? Troy is a stupid assed idiot! He's a really boneheaded stupid, really DUMB mother fucker!
I mean: what wife that truly loves her husband, and what husband that truly loves his wife, what husband in his right mind, once the couple is planning their marriage, doesn't give the roommate, no matter how good a friend or roomie they are, the gate, tell them to move the fuck out, get their own apartment, but get the hell out of their home?
What roomie, no matter how good a friend or renter they are, when they hear that the original rentor/roomie on the lease, is getting married, doesn't give notice and move-out, ASAP?
If you don't want the roomie fucking or doing anything sexual with your girlfriend or wife, boyfriend or husband, then move the roommate the fuck out, or move out yourself, well before you bring girl or boyfriend or wifey/hubby home and they meet roomie!
Married couples need their own home, live alone in it, so they can have any kind and all the sex they want, be as loud as they want, and make love and lots of little babies, (if the couple wants children), in private.

These two never did have a real marriage and no love lost, between them! One is as bad of a worthless cheating whoring slut, as the other is! There are as many worthless cheating whore sluts, men, or women!

Stories like this, prove to me, time and again, why I am damned smart staying single! Probably the main reason I hated this story and many others like it!

The latter statement above, makes me realize, I'd best ask myself WHY THE FUCK, I read these cheating spouse stories, in the first place! All I get is pissed-off! Not aroused!
Maybe...Troy isn't the ONLY dumb, stupid assed idiot! (Oh well, I've been called a whole lot worse, in my long life span! Least I wrote that last, about myself! Know who to blame then, right? :)

IF wifey had cheated on Troy with John, while Troy was deployed overseas, I've seen and heard of that happening a lot, for a lot of reasons, both from the spouse still at home, their viewpoint, or the deployed spouses viewpoint.
None of the reasons cheating whore sluts give for cheating, are rightful, because, there is no reason to cheat on a spourse, until after the final divorce decree is signed by a judge and the marriage is offically toast! Then if you want to cheat, go fuck your brains out, if you really must....I guess...
But, this story to me, was just too contrived in too many places, to seem even remotely realistic.

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by Anonymous07/21/14

Great story

Great story :-D

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by Anonymous08/14/14

Is It Me?

I read this story awhile back and was shocked but this time I thought it was very hot! Thanks

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by Bret_Harte08/21/14

Troy needs to take action for the wifes and roommies rule breaking.

Like replacing John's lube with surgical glue, so the next time the wife and roommie cheat on him they will become joined longer than they planned on. Having to go to the hospital to become disengaged should provide plenty of evidence for the divorce and alienation of affection lawsuits, as well as, John's court martial for immoral behavior.

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by Anonymous08/26/14

wife

Good story. My wife wants to try a black cock, should I let her

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by ThomasLord08/31/14

A Great One

Very well written with very hot sex scenes. About as good as it gets here.

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by Anonymous08/31/14

Trash

Normal for this category anymore. 1 star.

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by impo_5811/03/14

He was the sad one...

He was the sad one, not she...She was a cheating whore, nothing more, but he was a sad one, with no morals and no self-respect...

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by Anonymous11/03/14

Very erotic

If your ultimate fantasy is to share your wife, this story is for you (& me).
I remind all people who posted derogatory comments that whereas the tags are indeed out to lunch, the list of similar stories is not at all misleading: "I watched my wife..." - "...time-shared wife..." etc.
But really, guys!
* * *
HE WANTED HER TO FUCK HIS BUDDY & HIS DREAM CAME TRUE. PERIOD.
I wanted my wife to fuck other men but she did not want (at least not that i am aware of).

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by Anonymous01/10/15

Impo - you're the fucking sad one you goat fucking moron.

It's a fucking fantasy fuck story on a sex site.

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by Anonymous01/13/15

Inseminated

What is wrong about the roommate knocking Kathy up? That would have made a far more erotic story that could have gone on and on.....

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by Goodhue03/16/15

More Horseshit!

Do pussy-ass wimps like this dip-shit husband really exist?! Based on all the wimps I've read about letting other guys fuck their wives,girlfriends,mothers,sisters,pet goats,etc. on this site it seems like they're in the vast majority. BULLSHIT! Lets start writing about the real world,where guys beat the ever-loving shit out of horned-toads who fuck their wives,girlfriends,etc. AND then slap the bitch silly before physically throwing her out the front door! It's time that the writers on this site,and the guys they write about,grow a pair!!!

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by Anonymous08/24/15

I wouldn't expect any real stuff on this site. It's all fantasy crap, coming from the minds of loser writers who actually want to be treated like this.

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by Anonymous08/29/15

too much dirty talk

okay, as a woman there is no way i would ever use that kind of language, so for me it became more of a ...it took the excitement away for me. i mean being a little vocal is one thing but that was like going to an extreme. it was just too much.

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by Anonymous09/27/15

Ending ruined it for me.

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