Shemale Sister-in-Law

Loved it!

The title says it all! Wish I had a sister in law like that.

So Freakin HOT

One of the top 5 I've ever read.

OUTSTANDING !!!!!

Whew, couldn't make it through the entire story before blowing my load. This is your best one yet.

Nice Story

Loved the story as a whole, but personally, I would have been pissed that my wife kept something like that a secret instead of letting me join in for so many years. I would have divorced her and told her to get the fuck out of the house for being a lying, cheating, cold fish, bitch.... But that is me and that has nothing to do with how hot your story was, good job, and thank you for sharing it.

5/5

absolutely fantastic

Unique Threesome

A family threesome with a twist. Very good transgender story line.

5/5

The part where the Kara revealed her relationship with her sister - especially the part about the wedding - that's just right up my alley right there. Absolutely loved it, and I usually don't like these kinds of stories with more than one sub to one domme, but here it just works. My one critique would be that it's not longer.

Very hot. Shemale domination, incest and cuckoldry (in a way of memories, so thankfully nothing extreme, as is typical for cuckoldry stories) - very nice combination. Similar to Shemale Surprise but unlike that one this one is actually pretty good. The plot was rushed a little but other than that it's really good. I hope you will write more of shemale stories in the near future.

I have NEVER commented on a story before. This was the hottest story I've ever read on this site in years of reading! Kudos!

Putting myself in Daryl's shoes...

...I would have been fine with things up until the time Amanda and Kara started dropping bombs about the wedding day. Truth be told, I ALMOST quit reading there.
Other than that, pretty good story. I'd like to see more of these three.

That was muuuuch hotter than I'd have imagined!

Great

This story definitely touched upon my fantasies and what a huge turn on to read!

Once again...

you have written yet another masterpiece. You never fail to amaze me with your writings, thank you for all that you have brought here.

5/5

Amazingly Erotic

Just loved reading this story, it says "The End" but it could lead to a series with Mistress Kara moving in and being serviced every morning and night.

I liked it, but...

I read it through, but I was really taken out of the story (irritated) by the protagonist. Not sharing your submissiveness, I was offended by the revelations and upset that he wasn't. I can't get into the incest, infidelity, dishonesty, and male submissiveness here. None of those are turn-ons for me, but they were real issues for me.

My other criticism is the actual revelation of Kara's gender. Her dominance might've been the reason for writing this way, but I thought that it would've been much, much sexier to seduce and even tease the husband.

I generally enjoy your work (even themes that I don't identify with), but I didn't like any of these characters, and the story felt rushed.

the ending seemed rushed

hot action

But the setup was ridiculous.

one of my biggest fantasies

Good job with the setup, often times intros are rushed despite the opportunity to build anticipation. This is by far one of my biggest fantasies I hope to one day share with my husband so I really enjoyed it. Your words did an excellent job illustrating the scene.

what about the cheating?

The revelations are too much to handle for any man. The years of cheating behind his back, doing extra things for her, giving her so much control. Kara truly is the man in the whole setup n daryl just a nice guy to have kids with. I kno its just a story but still ot goes too far.

Hot - as always!

I am one of your biggest fans. I loved the story. Despite the fact it is a bit preposterous from a reality standpoint, the concept kept me hard as steel for the duration. And wanting to be in his place.

Great story

i am so jealous of him

Another Great Story

You deliver yet again. This is an amazing story and would love to see a sequel. Not to spoil to much but I love the ending and the plot is great. I love these stories and hope you continue your great writing.

too much cuckoldry for me

wedding day stuff was unnecessary guess she was insecure when her sister was married...but its not okay for cheat for years (although this a story)should have included him atleast at the wedding

Couldn't continue reading after he didn't even react to finding out that his was was cheating on him for years...with her brother. Yeah ok.

Sister's?

wow! I love being horny throughout both stories! Would die to see this as a video!

We... More is all I can say besides, More Please!

Very hot very sexy what a lucky guy! Wife, Sister, Dominate Sister, submissive wife, submissive hubby, shemale & it's the sister & she is Dominate a Shemale Mistress and subby hubby is now her slut and a cuckold too damn what a sexy story.

continue this tale please and i do have to agree that the wedding stuff was too much. This didn't have to include kara being a bitch and trying to humiliate him by bringing up that she had his wife before and after the wedding. both girls need to be put in their place. the wife for cheating and lying and kara for being a bitch.

Amazing story!!!!!!!!!!!

Congrats ;)

very hot

Loved it.. please continue... I would gladly have a wife and sister-in-law like that... I would feminine for them and it could be the three of us girls .. we could shop together then go home and be fucked like little cock hungry sluts.. love to eat her pussy and suck her long hard cock..

Coue of cock sluts

Tremendously hot. It's hard to imagine being that forthright with my wife and receiving a simular response. I like the realistic cock sizes. Most stories have mule hung trannies violating cirgin holes with pleasurable ease. Totally a hot fantasy. Although I do wish that he had gotten to fuck Kara too.

Sometimes...

I (sometimes) love to read a slutty love story, like this one. The timeless bond of (some) siblings can be impressive on its own. The strong-flexible bond of (some) partners is another thing witnessed as both impressive and mundane. This story has both.

I also (sometimes) love to read kinky, domination stories, like this one. The thrill of illicit lust for a relative (neighbor, close friend, co-worker, etc.) is tantalizing. The reveal of a hidden affair, while being dominated, is seductively enchanting. This story has both (I feel like there should be a math joke about now, but I've none).

These are the themes that I like the best in your stories. You already know I'm a fan of your dialogue, and your revealing the thoughts and emotions of your characters. I'm pacing myself in reading your stories (even though you've really ratcheted up your output), because I don't want to run out of stories (silly perhaps).
As always, I hope you keep writing; sharing your gift. Thanks.

The problem with this over-the-top garbage?

Is that, even for fiction, it is neither plausible or believable. Even Star Trek makes more sense than this and at least there some of the characters are actually likeable. Not the case in this trainwreck. Just bad, start to finish. Stories like this are why I wish Lit had negative stars.

Not garbage

Great story, start to finish. Awesome fun fantasy that had me shooting a massive load and will read again

One of the hottest on Literotica

You're a great writer, and I imagine you must be amazing in person too! Thanks for the long, hot story that kept me edging for a long time. I'm going to share this one with my wife, hoping it might giver some ideas. (Hey, one can hope!)

Excellent story

Loved this! Add the fact that the wife was submissive to her sister and turned her husband! Excellent. I also wish that Literotica did not allow for "Anonymous" comments. Sure people would have fake accounts but many will not go through the trouble to take time to create an account and screen name just so they can whine about a story.

Sissy hard to get

She male sissy hard to find. The mother fucker, and the taboo relationship between the two of us who are in a pretty pair of pantyhose and high heels are a turn on. The mother and sister are the most sexy and fun to watch. The mother fucker, the son soon found out about the new delicious and feminine way to submit to the new feminine bitches learning. The mother fucker, and the taboo relationship between the two of us who have cocks love to hear about it and the other unorthodox hot incest. The mother fucker, and the smooth pantyhose against the skin and sexy cock made it clear that the new love of my own mother's cunt was just exciting and wonderful!

First rate

Enjoy your other writing, this was something special.

Awesome

OMG, what a great story ! ! ! ! Got me so wet and hard in my panties, I would love to have a sister in law like Kara !!!!!

Sequel/spin-off

You should write a story about the sister fucking the wife on their wedding day. Maybe a crzy bachelorette party where all the bridesmaids get fucked too?