Tommy Triorchidism

thanks

I think Gretchen, Sybil and Tricia will find someway to visit him. thanks for the lighthearted rendering

Too infantile for me

The only enjoyable aspect of this story was imagining the extra pain he'd suffer having three testicules crushed instead of just two, when the husbands caught him.

Wrong Category

He plays with 3 wives yet not one of their husbands make an appearance or utters a single word. The only husband to say or appear is his father and that is totally irrelevant to the story. so this tale should have been placed in Mature.

Cute

And, in addition to cute, very different. Kudos!

Interesting

Always good to know you can learn something new reading porn :-)

@ xylem the category is loving wives which includes cheating wives. You'll have to agree the wives were cheating. So it does qualify.

Damn What A Great Read*****

Never seen this story line before good going. Thanks for sharing.

Wrong Category

Gordo I agree there are cheating wives and cheating wives are LW. BUT the cheated on husband has to make an appearance and interact with the characters otherwise the marriage relationship means nothing. Here other than being told the sluts were married their marriage status meant nothing. Indeed the author's own tags for the story do not reference cheating, marriage or any relationship. At best the tags refer to "older women" and "younger man". Which is why I suggested this story was better placed in Mature.

A bit superficial

To a certain degree it reads like the same event repeated three with references to other times, but there is little or no tension in the story.. I wonder how Gretchen had
a relationship with her husband before our three ball wonder came along.

you took clinical disorders

and made them entertaining.

very entertaining.

Didn't care for it. Just not my cup of tea. Thanks for the effort.

A+ for a totally original premise

It was difficult to read this with a straight face. It was an awesome read. I couldn't give it any less than five stars.

Misspelled

I noticed that you consistently mispel the adjective wan as wane, it happens in both this one and your other stories not to mention that you overuse the word quite a bit.