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All Comments on 'Have You Ever?'

by Armychick

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BoxcarbillBoxcarbillalmost 9 years ago
Nice

start. Has the right start to be a great story. Keep it going.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Leaves me wanting more...

...fantastic short story. Perfect amount of detail!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
good scents

Like your mentioning scent and taste; would've loved more olfactory detail.

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