All Comments on 'Runner Girl Ch. 10'

I'M SO HAPPY HE TOLD HER!

....nice progression in the storyline.

I am so happy he told her too. I love how well she took it. Pretty durn excited to see what philanthropic activity John is doing. And ALICIA AND RAY <3 <3 <3

There is one shadow - London - and whether John had more than a hug during the second trip to London and whether he behaves on the third trip.

As a man when I have been in love, I have refused offers of sex from former GFs and I am a bit surprised that John succumbed.

I can't believe that he would tell her about one... um... not exclusive incident and not another, so I believe him. I expect it is one of his sisters, but please let us know.

On the side, how many chapters are there *actually* going to be? ;)

My guess...'NO KIDS'

But there are 13 chapter, they are all written and posting each day.

only thirteen??!! it's too soon to end...

So excited each morning to read a new chapter. Can't wait until tomorrow!

So enjoy your stories...so waiting for the next chapter!

This site is called Literotica and your writing fits in perfectly.

Great stories, really well written with depth and feeling, the sex is loving and graphic, erotic and stimulating. A refreshing change from so much on this site.

Stick with New York, the city is so diverse that there is plenty of scope.

If you enjoy research, what about a story of Nana in her youth, A story of 1950s New York romance and lust could be an interesting slant.

Whatever you write, please continue. Your great.

She is delightfully intelligent, or perhaps tolerant. One should be always careful

about background noise when telephoning. Perhaps it was telly?

The line where he tells her she makes it so easy to spoil her is a great clincher! These two are just so right together, and you have such a flair for expressing that!

Another great chapter ... ten for ten so far!

secretly taking pictures of her as she slept?

just a touch creepy

I disaggree with Right bank. Your sleeping woman is one of the sexiest things you'll ever see, and taking a picture of her is almost required. Not to be shared with anyone but her.

Love your stories! Thank you for them.

WHY IS ANY BEHAVING LIKE A DESPERATE MANCRAZY BITCH....HE FUCKED HIS EX AND SHE'S OKAY AND HE CAN'T EVEN TALK WITHOUT THE SLUT GETTING HORNY....TRASH BITCH IS OKAY WITH HIM KEEPING THINGS FROM HER