Get on Your Knees

Good Read

Liked your story and the way Jenny played Tim for a fool and got all she wanted from him. However, you should have added more chapters to your story as you left a couple of openings for more. Like with Parker giving Jenny the opportunity to seduce her and use the seduction to Jenny's advantage over both Tim and Parker. Then having Tim eating out of Jenny's hand just to fuck and lick her at Jenny's command. Really a lot could be accomplished with more chapters as Jenny gains control over both Tim and Parker. Love to read about Parker crawling to Jenny, kissing and sucking her toes just to lick her sweet pussy. Just the thought gets me all wet and ready for a tongue.

I know it has been over a year since you wrote this story, but maybe you can dust it off and offer your readers more. ::::)))))