i was expected for the better ending but yours was make me so depressed, and i don't understand very much what were you writing at the end, i was hope one of those woman discover that they were peeping and she enjoy of being have a audience, so that she will serve his eyes...
English
the ending was bad
i was expected for the better ending but yours was make me so depressed, and i don't understand very much what were you writing at the end, i was hope one of those woman discover that they were peeping and she enjoy of being have a audience, so that she will serve his eyes...
Comnfused
It seems like the story took a huge shift at the end. Didn't follow it.
Grinning
And I'd love to see additional, lengthier chapters.
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