All Comments on 'A Writer's Observation'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
the ending was bad

i was expected for the better ending but yours was make me so depressed, and i don't understand very much what were you writing at the end, i was hope one of those woman discover that they were peeping and she enjoy of being have a audience, so that she will serve his eyes...

WatcherRobWatcherRobalmost 9 years ago
Comnfused

It seems like the story took a huge shift at the end. Didn't follow it.

MaresEatOatsMaresEatOatsalmost 8 years ago
Grinning

And I'd love to see additional, lengthier chapters.

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