by Absolutelywickedthoughts
The only thing I regret about this chapter is waiting for the next one :) great job as always... you want a 5 you got a 5... I can't wait who the new targets will be
.....but I cannot deny that I have thoroughly enjoyed this series to date.
Looking forward to your next installment.
Please mind the technical aspects of your writing a little better. Some rather odd turns of phrase and minor spelling errors are nothing to fuss about, but attention to that level of details is one thing that separates the masters from the wannabes.
You have the makings of a master.
Mr Anonymous, if you could provide an example or two of these alleged odd turns of phrase and/or spelling, that would be great.
It's all well and good to say that there are errors, but if you don't point them out, how is one supposed to improve?
Looking forward to the next installment!! Loved the twist at the end of this chapter!!
I think you are going a little fast in your narrations. You need to give a much better descriptions.
In next parts, I'd like if Joe fuck all ten cheerleaders. Also I'd like if he fuck more mall cops or real cops (women in uniform are cool).
Love the new story but waiting on the next gift chapter.
i was hoping 4 something that would lead him back to space cant wait 4 more
Chapter 4 was sent to my editor tonight. A Gift From His Father...is almost ready to send for editing.
I'm really curious if you are planning something else as well.
Any idea when chapter 4 might be posted? I read it's being edited, just wondering, thanks
Well, since my last note of praise. My family and I
have been on holiday to India. Where I tucked
Into "A gift from my father"
Your a good writer. Be happy and strong. I hope
Your life is ok.. But your readers seem a little too
demanding.
Guys remember! This is FREE and AWT doesn't need
Pressure to speed up his process, otherwise it backfires
On us. Either the quality of writing gives or...(god forbid)
He stops through the added pressures of reality... LIFE.
When is the next part going out? This year or next? I love all of your stories. When are the rest be out?
I liked the twist with the sister's new boyfriend at the end. Keep up the good work. I also get a kick out of how pushy some of your readers get about your stuff. You must be doing something right because they are apparently addicted.... "Where's my fix man?" ... Haha
I like Nancy, it would be nice if he could become less entangled with the others. Cindy is nice, but Nancy just seems the best. I even thought how nice if she moved in with the family.
This story reeks of future Everyone Fucks Everyone bullshit. It's honestly incredible how few writers are able to just keep it to the main character fucking and leave all of these sharing fantasies at the door.
Oh oh, time for a reality check or maybe an upgrade? Another well thought out and written chapter. I look forward to reading the next. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.