Something a little different, and handled nicely. Slightly askew from typical US English usage, but charmingly so. Aside from apparently not using any lubricant, the action was described intensely enough to arouse this reader. Please keep writing.
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Nicely done
Something a little different, and handled nicely. Slightly askew from typical US English usage, but charmingly so.
Aside from apparently not using any lubricant, the action was described intensely enough to arouse this reader.
Please keep writing.
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