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am i missing something?
no dead husband with his brains splattered all over the bed so they decided to fuck?
or was it dark and they wanted to fuck over the top of her husbands still warm corpse?
still sucked
Ending was bogus
3 Stars for style. I had high hopes.
I believe this wife needed to be destroyed utterly, this was not it. It was just not painful enough of a revenge story. And yes, the husband had revenge. He shut down and lived his life dying a little everyday, that is his revenge. This was just sad.
and reg walks away smirking
REALLY?
What a fucking joke !!!
I gave this story a 1 because this site is not set up to accept negative number ratings. So other than the lowest number possible I would also like to say to the writer...FUCK YOU !!!
The several stories you wrote all have one thing in common....the wronged party always gets fucked over by the end !!!
If you had any BALLS maybe you could write a BTB story but until then....STOP taking it up the ass !!!
you write like a FEMALE
the mans at fault and the woman was right to cheat, this is why Trump won, this female point of view.
Racc shit kill them both and the mom and the sister...listen u you fem try to write real story where the men are not wimps or yes men. So she is smart but she cant find a way to show she sees his side? and yes killing the slut with while a crime is not a sin....he is not murdering but killing her to clear his mind and focus. You cant murder a slut, you are just cleaning the gene pool.
Not enough
First - it makes no sense. She thinks he killed himself, she rushes home but doesn't find a body and then jumps in to bed with Greg??
Second- while not a big fan of BTB there certainly needed some vengeance on cheating Greg.
Third - I hate when the innocent victim leads a sad lonely life. Why couldn't he have found someone else? Best revenge is living well.
The beginning of the story was good and definitely what I was feeling but then it veered way way off course.
Thank you for trying to conclude the story. I really hate when authors leave a story open ended like the original.
I agree, it's crap
Sorry, it is. Weak pathetic male character, can't find another partner and can never be happy again. Blah
Won't read anymore from this author, it is probably all the same crap.
BS, BS, and MORE BS..
No forgiveness here, to bad. I would of made her jump through hoops to get her family back, eventually I'd of forgiven her, eventually. He couldn't find someone else? What utter BS!
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