Night

Until she got away and the Police got him

Then he became Bubba's Butt Buddy in prison for the rest of his life. I wonder how he thinks his plan worked out? Nothing original, clever or even mildly interesting in this drivel. Just another rapist.

Very well written

Really good story, detailed, yet it goes straight to the point and we keep the psychological grip that he has over her. Quite realistic. And very well written. More please!

It was written well, but could have used a little more detail. Such as, why does he know her name? more in depth detail in the sexual encounter as well. It was kind of a wham bam, thank you ma'am.

I liked this but how does he know her name? Also, more please.

Wow

That was powerful, I really enjoyed your writing