Kirk,
What's a girl have to do to get the "family secret" out of you, huh?
I've got a pretty nice set, too...but alas, not magical!
Maybe I should start a rock collection - yeah, that's it!!! That's the answer... right?... RIGHT?????????
Once again, another "magical" journey into a very talented writer's mind!!!
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Anonymous09/08/04
What a riot!
That was fucking hysterical! It was very easy to visualize the images you painted. You have a real talent for injecting bits of true comedy into your story. You should try writing for television or film.
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Anonymous01/25/05
Great change of pace
Very funny story. Try writing a pure comedy, you have the talent.
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Anonymous12/19/16
Interesting Concept 4*
I like the concept, but I can only give 4* for a 1 pager. I would hope you could add a second chapter with at least two pages. Something like what happened between them in the years in between this story's timeline. Still I liked it.
English
Now I'm bummed!!!
Kirk,
What's a girl have to do to get the "family secret" out of you, huh?
I've got a pretty nice set, too...but alas, not magical!
Maybe I should start a rock collection - yeah, that's it!!! That's the answer... right?... RIGHT?????????
Once again, another "magical" journey into a very talented writer's mind!!!
What a riot!
That was fucking hysterical! It was very easy to visualize the images you painted. You have a real talent for injecting bits of true comedy into your story. You should try writing for television or film.
Great change of pace
Very funny story. Try writing a pure comedy, you have the talent.
Interesting Concept 4*
I like the concept, but I can only give 4* for a 1 pager. I would hope you could add a second chapter with at least two pages. Something like what happened between them in the years in between this story's timeline. Still I liked it.
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